All Comments on 'Rosco & Louise Ch. 01'

so far. Just don't delay chapter 2 for very long.

but you should read through it before you submit as there are a lot of spelling mistakes which detract from this very good story.I also liked the bit early in the story where you said his mother was six feet tall and his father was four inches!

I do hope you will come back and finish this one. It really is a very good story. Here's to you!