All Comments on 'Rose's Awakening Ch. 01'

True greatness

i am not into incest but i have always been a fan of a daddy/daughter situation...i am a slave and i can relate to all these feelings...i met my Master on the internet and things progressed from there and He has broughten out so many things in me....am i am truely His little girl...He gives me baths and washes my hair and reads me stories at night...You seem to be really interested in this type of thing with your stories...so find a woman and have fun with her and experiance new things. Great story you gave me a couple of great orgasms!

Every aspect of this story is perfect best one I have ever read,completely worth it artistically and sexually.

5 for the content, 2 for the lack of editing.

This story is spectacular. Except for the editing, it's the best. You should get yourself a nice editor to edit this story, cuz sometimes, bad editing is quite a turn off.

Ah, father/daughter love is the best. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Ah, father/daughter love is the best! A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.