by rayvyn
This is such an amazing story. It is intense and has all the elements of erotic literature, and the author is a fabulous writer. A fantasy situation is only as good as the author's use of language, and this writer is a master.
i kind of guessed who the mystery man might have been but having said that it still was a GREAT story. definitely one of my favorites!!!!
this is actually one of my own fantasies! I dont know what else to say... this is the BEST story that I have read!
Not bad, but I couldn't concentrate well on the actual story with the constant changes in tense and point of view..