All Comments on 'Rough Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Amazing

This is such an amazing story. It is intense and has all the elements of erotic literature, and the author is a fabulous writer. A fantasy situation is only as good as the author's use of language, and this writer is a master.

naughty_housewifenaughty_housewifeabout 14 years ago
perfect

i kind of guessed who the mystery man might have been but having said that it still was a GREAT story. definitely one of my favorites!!!!

freakgirl1134freakgirl1134over 13 years ago
unbelivable!!!

this is actually one of my own fantasies! I dont know what else to say... this is the BEST story that I have read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Needs some editing...

Not bad, but I couldn't concentrate well on the actual story with the constant changes in tense and point of view..

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