All Comments on 'Rules of the Game'

its crazy but i loved every bit of it lol

I laughed, i cried, i was completely in love with this story, please keep writing!!

this one kept my interest all the way, outstanding storytelling author, pace, character development, everything was top shelf, aces!

well, I expected to confront the usual misogonistic stuff, but was pleasantly surprised by the quality and content. Well reading and not too moralistic,

The story development from revenge to self discovery is a very nice change.

While a fantasy that a single women would have 8 sugar daddies, it is one of the most sophisticated plots that I have read here.

Please keep writing.

And entertaining too. But she has to be one of the worlds biggest and dumbest prostitutes. (She's a prostitute, not a slut, because she's getting paid for having sex.)

SO for revenge she becomes a whore? Yeah - that makes sense.

There is no reason for this behaviour.

There is no reason for a woman to subject herself to this demeaning behaviour.

This is the perfect example of when a person (in this case a woman) should seek counseling.

when the only positive comments to such a negative narrative are made by screen names identifying themselves as female.

My first, and strongest feeling is disappointment, followed by sadness.

oh well

Liked all the sex but there was something really sleazy about the way the older pervs went about setting up Lisa with the video. And WTF,with Lisa! Her best friend/roomie and her boyfriend get it on so for revenge she's going to gangbang 8 middle-aged guys?! The final arrangement has her being a "house guest"? Yeah,right! Try mistress,whore,twat,perv,etc!

A Better name for this story might have been,"Blond Twat and the Eight Pervs".

After reading halfway through I was starting to wonder how this would all play out and you managed it brilliantly with the exception of a few excusable typos I'm impressed with the way you wove her into their lives and of course I wish Lisa and you the very best thank you for writing this. Paul