by ILmonamour
would like to see the continuation of both your stories to know what happens to them like getting money then sam what happens with the baby and that. cant wait to read more from you.
I really liked this story. The ONLY thing that bothered me is Marcus would not wear the #52. Receivers don't wear #'s in the 50s 60s or 70s. Those are for the lads in the trenches. Speaking of which, how about a story for one of them
I had made a similar comment when I copy edited the chapter, but the author rejected my comment, as the author has every right to do, for any reason or for no reason. The author is always right.
But Ilmonamour writes a damn good story! And it's a privilege and an honor to work with this fine writer.
Ambush and Estragon..that error is completely in my own and I overlooked it way too quickly. I apologize greatly for breaking from the flow of the initial storyline. As ever, thank you both for pointing out the ever obvious...the next time I will address these technicals :)
I hope you do continue to write more stories like thi. You're one of my favorite authors and I have enjoyed both stories so far and I know I will like what you have next!!
And this is a great series, a fine follow-up to "Reading the Defense". Tell it your way, always. You go, girl!
Your intermingling of sport and romance is really good making the stories and the lives of your characters really interesting, a fine read.
The best writers in Lit are in this section - no question - and you're certainly one of them.
Good story, but I found it a little wordy at times and had to skim paragraphs in some chapters. Keep up the good writing though :)
Absolutely loved this story though I wish it would've ended with the epilogue of a wedding and child. Well deserved 5 stars for each chapter :D
There have been a few stories, this one included, where my eyes just started sweating. I really enjoyed your story. Thank you.
Not only a well written romance but enjoyable due to the inside window into football and the world of Hadley's creative paintings. I would gladly welcome more chapters!
I really liked reading this. It was very well written and easy to read. I'd like to read more of your work or more about these characters.
Loved the story, doesn't seem overdone. Everything in it was perfect. And of course, the magic is that you made us love the characters first. Thanks for giving us such a beautiful story!
It was a very good story, I just couldn't read it anymore. I am tired of women doing the same thing in life and I can't read about it during my relaxing time. Great story though.