All Comments on 'Running To Stand Still Ch. 6'

I wonder why so crudely abnormal nor erotic?

Writing crude perverted garbage that is not an any way erotic.

Just pure sick perversion of a psychopath. One of the worst. One star of course.

a nervous episode. TK U MLJ LV NV

awesome, genius....

depraved story with no likeable characters sorry Iwastes the timt to read

you are sick, pathetic, loser, Posting sick shit does not make you a writer and you certainly aren't.

{B:}Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more.{B}

That's what loving wives is about. No judgement. Just wives having fun. Wives that are loving... others.

Personal attacks on the author just shows how little comprehension you commenters have. You all probably use whatever little imagination you have to explain away the failure that is your life.

Whatever reason your parents ignore you, your wife left you, your kids want nothing to do with you, you couldn't accept that it actually had anything to do with you so you make up excuses for why you are oh, so, painfully alone. No matter how implausible your excuse, you cling to it as you read these stories and rail at the gods through your comments on an anonymous website.

BTW, I thought the story was pretty good. I did have a problem with the way it jumped around, though. Kinda hard to follow

i read all the 6 chapters and was enjoying it .."UNTIL" .. he apeared at the hotel to surprise his wife .. but when he enetered in to the room he saw and knew there was something wrong .. BUT OH NO, he could not be a little compassionate and find out what was troubling his wife .. he had to get his sick sex with out worrying what might have happened .. as far as he knew she could have been raped .. but did he care .. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ...

With a husband like Mark, what wife needs a rapist?

You need to keep your silly ass in incest and ir. That's where your garbage belongs.

204 items of authorship ( if not even more: however, this godforsaken late forties/early fifties man, a perschance happy virgin to conjugal-bliss with women at least ( he says he's straight. Is he though?), doesn't look like he'll ever be reduced to deleting his works, irritating mass producing exhibitionist that he is)... with lots of potential that readers should find palpable when perusing with an unprejudiced mind.

He's got attractive narrative building and the vocabulary for it, and it's a shame his internal, and external, spellchecker is defunct. His plots are attractive. His unflailing attitude towards his readers.. used to be attractive.

But i guess.. he's now realized he's wasted his one talent. And if he's still unwedded, it's a heaven-sent boon to all of us XX-grnomed Homo sapiens... never ever to be defiled by his likes.

That's if he still is around.. in almost-post-Covid 2021!

Is this where incels come from?