All Comments on 'Russian Bride'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
fantastic story

a wonderful story very well written . . and from things I have learned over the years . . parts of it are not very far from reality . . .

very nicely done

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 15 years ago
Excellent

An excellent piece: realistic plot, finely written, superb sex, and a happy ending. Couldn't be better! Congratulations.

sirsemegasirsemegaover 15 years ago
Well done

very enjoyable. I love happy endings! Like the train car escapade as well!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great story!

It was so well written. I absolutely adore stories that go into such detail. Hope to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
nice.....

nice, very nice. Thanks

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 15 years ago
Great premise!

This has a great premise - quite enjoyable!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wow

being a romantic person myself I absolutely adored ur story, very well written with a meaningful plot too. I enjoyed ur story. please keep writing.God bless wish u luck.

Anaisha, India

razorlytrazorlytover 15 years ago
VERY sweet

Thank you for your hard work. It was lovely! You do what I do and write too much back story for some on this site, but I did really like it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
fantastic...

Loved every bit of it...I couldn't stop reading it. Everything was perfect...just what I like to read!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wonderful Effort

You have done a best job.. its not only story but to a stept to create awareness in society to help others out of troubles. Plus you also wrote so nicely about True Love and how can we differentiate Love and Sex by body language and expressions.

Keep it up buddy..!!!

bignsassy818bignsassy818over 15 years ago
Amazing

Totally worth reading.

A wonderful story with a very good plot and just oh-so-romantic.

nuttynormnuttynormover 15 years ago
Patient Love

Brilliant very enjoyable

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great story!

I've read some stories in Literotica but this is the first time that I made a comment. Your story is definitely sweet and romantic. It's the most enjoyably detailed story in this site. It could be a great novel if you make more chapters. Anyway, i looove this story. Thanks a zillion!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent

This is something different from the rest. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
thank you

That was truly a lovely story. Please write another in a similar vein, as this was absolutely wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wonderful

Wonderful story. A shame that slavery with the prostitution is increasing worldwide. So much love written in the story of two people but many live two lives - doing what they are forced to do but wanting something much better. Peace and blessings!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
from russia with love

Great story, pete and ludmila's characters are both well written

WarplanerWarplanerover 12 years ago
Awesome

Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Excellent!

Romantic noir,.gritty and touching.

Good writing. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A story with a little bit of everything

This story could easily be expanded into a TV movie or a TV show--like a NCIS character falling for the Russian beauty. Hell, might even get Mark Harmon a wife after several episodes.

GriffyD_BoyGriffyD_Boyabout 9 years ago

Awesome story, thanks for writing it.

ColonelinguistColonelinguist10 months ago

Nicely done! Erotic and well written too.

Only it seemed that Pete would have had to struggle a bit more with how he wanted to proceed with his inter most feelings about Ludmila after seeing for himself, what she was being forced to do on cctv. It would seem that most men would be trying to figure out weather or not if they should follow their head or their cock, after a few drinks.

In fact what might happen next between those two could be an even more devastating story of obsessions and passions.

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