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All Comments on 'S & S Ch. 01'

by les_sammy_0211

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
try

its got the makings of a great love story please carry it forward

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

please write the next chapter i cant wait

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
please please continue

great start. please continue. youre one of my favorites

ShikeShikeover 12 years ago
More Please

Please please please give us more. :)

It's well written and, so far, a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
MORE!!!

please finish it off!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please!!!

Please finish it :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
:)

I certainly hope you do continue it. I hope you're well. Seem kinda sad. <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
IF YOU ARE NOT GOING TO FINISH THE STORY WHY DID YOU START

YOU HAVE A GREAT STORY - SO FAR. WHY POST IT WHEN IT IS ONLY PARTIALLY COMPLETE.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Too detailed

I didn't need to know all the little I mean little details of your living but the little details can be exploited now when you write about your intimacy with your lover. Other wise continue with what you know and you will be a great author.

Did that done that.

SinteraSinteraabout 3 years ago

I would live to see this story finished.

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