All Comments on 'Sabrina and Her Brother Ch. 02'
by Susan_in_a_thong
- 14 Comments
Anonymousover 13 years agoBest learn how to proof read prior to entering the story. Mixed the terms "come" and "cum" each has different meaning and usage, learn the difference and then pick the proper one.
Anonymousover 13 years agoEnough all ready with all the proof reading crap . The story was great and readable . You people make me sick when all you have to complain about is grammar. These people write these stories for our enjoyment or pleasure . Get over it.
silver766over 13 years agoDon't listen to the jackass commenting on your spelling. This story was super hot and defintely sexy, i'm still on fire from reading it. Please continue this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. I voted you a 5, errors and all!!!!!!!!!
Anonymousover 13 years agolots of potential keep up the good work can't wait until all players get together
Anonymousabout 12 years agohow can anyone enjoy a story so poorly written? if you are writing for yourself keep it to yourself if you are writing for the readers make sure it is done right and complete. as most comments say on most stories ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL. THIS SERIES NEEDS A TOTAL REWRITE.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoThis is truly one of the best series on Literotica. You have one of the best erotic imaginations on the site and I so wish you would continue writing erotica.
Anonymousover 6 years agoit makes me cum. So far I'm 2 for 2, Your writing and description of the sex is really good. I have had a couple of really great orgasms. Thanks sweetie!! vastiesmith@gmail.com
Jagnagalmost 5 years agoIf your not a whore then what do you call a married woman with a baby fucking both brothers and sister in law ! One lucky bitch maybe ?
You decide, answers below please ...
Lee2012over 2 years agoAnother excellent job! Kinda late to be sayin, but screw the chicken shit from 9 years ago. Just a troll. If a stor creates AND MAINTAINS an erection from beginning to end, you’re very good. 5 *
Cjmach18 months agoSo she is really just a slut who fucks amyone? She said she would think about t and Doug showed up out of no where and she fucks him!
