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" then we bored a ship"

Then it will sink.

This story has a good beginning I can't wait for it to get hot

I cannot wait to read more of this story!!!

Thanks so much, I should have a second chapter up here shortly. Don't forget to vote!

I do have an editor but I have seen that some errors slip through the cracks. Hopefully that won't keep you from enjoy a good story.

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