All Comments on 'Sacrificed by Curiosity Ch. 11'

You can't keep doing this to me! lol. I sooo wanted them to be free. I can't see Doug coming out of this without being severely traumatised. But this is really brilliant. Don't let this be the last one. There has got to be some light at the end of the tunnel for these two.

Writing's fab as usual.

Yep, you need to write another ... and please, have the tables turned on that rotten Donatien and crew. Let the good guys win ... and recover. :)

The others are right you have to write another chapter

wow that story was!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This had me sweating at the end... Lol I was almost in tears when they took Doug back to the room!!!!

NOOOO!!!!!!! you can't end it there, you have to let him really get the best of that stupid coven!!!!!! D:

Doug is going to kill himself! And the hero is such an idiot! Pleasepleasepleaseplease continue the story T=T

One of your worst stories and I skipped most of it.