All Comments on 'Sadie and Mark'

loved it well done, more please

best story ive read on this site in ages

the spanking killed the story it is to easy for one or both to get mad or hurt and end up hating each other keep it loving or put it in the nonconsent or nonerotic areas

Not a bad read, but they should have gone all the way.......LAROC

Hell, I read all of that and nobody even got laid! Argh! I want my time back!

You can't end it there

whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why did you end it there?!?!

What waste of time

very disapointed

rubbish

I actually loved the story. I'm not a huge fan of incest, but this story was written with loving tenderness, and the slow sure build up that I believe would be necessary for two family members to travel down that road. I had no problem with ending where you did, always leave them wanting more. As a fellow writer I understand that.