All Comments on 'Safe'

I have to say that was the most touching and well writen story I have read on Literotica so far. Please keep writing such beautiful stories, we all need them. Thanks.

I have to say your story was the most heartfelt story i have read in my life so far.. I wish you both nothing but joy and happiness and love.. Thank you..

Oh what a touching love story, it got hard to read near the end cos my eyes kept tearing up, I had to re-read the last few paragraphs a few times. A beautiful story, thank you so much for sharing :)

I can't wait to re-read this story when I have plenty of time to fully enjoy it. Fine, fine writing, very emotional, loved it.

I have to say this story was simply superb. It brought tears to my eyes reading it! Keep up the good work.

my heart was breaking .... i didn't want this story to end - how beautiful.

wow.. that was very cool. I have kind of been in a similar situation, although im a girl. So it touched me deeply.

Its strange how useless fathers and perverted people who want to be your father, leave such a hole. A gap.

Yet i still haven't found what i need to fill that gap. And my god it hurts.

thank you for writing such a beautiful story and for mentioning - and then exorcising - the demons we all have

need I say more?

thank you dearly this story relates exactly to me (except the age)i would like to thank you for giving me inspiration to tell my story. and confront my inner demons

A bit short perhaps, but great nevertheless-it brought me to tears more than once!

What a beautiful and heartwarming story. Well written too, with enough details of background and character development. Love it :)

I loved this story of two people who found love and happiness we all want to have!

FABULOUS STORY BUT A BIT SHORT . WELL WRITTEN FULL OF EMOTION AND TOUCHED WORDFOR EX : I'D DIDE FOR U TOO,AND I'LL LIVE FOR U,ALONG WITH MY KIDS U'LL BE THE CENETER OF MY LIFE . REALY UR WORD TOUCHED MY HEART INSIDE TO TOURN MY TEAR OUTu'r so talent keep the good work yoursnewstart

A really interesting story and awesome plot line... touching and heartfelt :) some of the gramatical errors ruined it a little for me though :( and though the beginning intro was great in it's inclusion of any important facts while still being concise, i thought some of the more touching scenes could be elaborated.. all in all a good read :D

Being a young bi-sexual girl in h.s., this touched me deeply knowing how it is to go thru molestation for years it made me teary eyed..i wanna ask if u ever get the chance write a story about a young girl who got molested and abused but instead of falling in love with a man make it a women maybe a long lost child hood friend (just a suggestion, or maybe ill write it romance is usually my stlye not erotica but ill try) this was great please never stop writing-shatteredlover

I have my own little wall that is only breached by very few people and reading this story was the most heart wrenching thing ive read in so long. Im usually a hard ass critic and i seldom find anything to hold my attention but my eyes were glued to this story and my internet connection was slower than water dripping to me;i have never been so happy that i found this story. You have a beautiful soul and an amazing talent. Thank you so much for writing this :)

a greate love story one of my personal fav from now

I loved your story. It really touched me in a place where a lot of other stories have not. One little phrase "I had become an abuser to myself" really made me think about my life and opened my eyes about a few things in my life. Thank you.

I would love to have what Justin and Michael have. This story warmed my heart.

pass me the kleenex i havent balled like a baby for years.....fantastic....xxxxxx

Its 6am where I'm at, I'm reading in the dark and I'm balling my eyes out. Well written, so real, so beautiful (how you did that in 2 pages is amazing). When Michael finally broke down, as a good story should, I could feel his pain and redemption. Thank you very much

loved this well wrote very good....dinkyboots

That was one of the most beautiful and romantic stories I have read. Thank you

The horrid ugliness of Michael's story and the barriers, the walls used in this story, built higher and higher to keep the victim safe as he gets older ring so true. Yes lonesome, it is a beautiful and romantic story and not the sordid life of complete numbness in reality.

You wrote about a child who was emotionally damaged and carried it into adulthood. Being a short story, the pacing is fast, but this is a good story overall. I like how he actually said "That was hot. Thanks." Because that really showed Justin how fucked up Michael really was. :3

Thank you thank you for your story, your words are saturated with hope.

wow mj you did it again i loved that story im still crying for micheal i thought he would continue to run if not for justin thanks for a beautiful story

Beautifully written and a very touching story. Loved it.

love happy endings.

This is the best gay short story I've read. Very well done. Tears in my eyes.

I absolutely love this story, especially how his struggles and triumphs are portrayed. Thank you!

It's an okay story. The story line is great but I think it lacks good character development and voice. I felt like I was reading a letter. If that's what you were going for, great, but I tend to want to be attached to the character and you missed the mark. I think it could do with a rewrite. But, line I said you have a great skeleton. Just needs some meat.

I could have really loved this story but I kind of agree with the last comment. There wasn't much character development really and there was hardly any actual dialogue between the two men so I didn't feel connected to them at all. It's almost like you've written a story that I didn't get to read but just had someone explain it to me.

It's a shame because this really could have been fantastic.

The plot is great. The writing is neither here, nor there. This is a site for lit erotica, but your final result is neither a good read, nor very erotic. I am not sure I understand how this story got a rating it has, but to me it looks like a solid 2 stars.

I absolutely loved this story and the writing. It was very heartfelt and moving. I enjoyed how Justin’s love helped Michael become a whole person capable of showing emotion, trust and care for another. Excess sexual erotica was not needed. Loved it!

Loved your story

My heart was broken before it swelled with love. I’m leaving this comment on December 8, 2021, some 17 years and 7 months after it posted to Lit. Thank you M J Lindsay for all you shared

Beautiful well written thank you

A very moving love story.

I read some of the comments, but my glass is half full not half empty.

Any romance that can bring a tear to the eye and a lump to the throat is well worth 5 stars.

Thanks for creating, and sharing.