by TheGreyKnight
Well, that perfectly sums up one of my all-time favorite fantasies. I thoroughly enjoyed this! Great work!
I loved it. There's no other way to word it other than that is one lucky girl!!
Absolutely perfect. And I agree with a previous comment, lucky girl.
Amazing. Just amazing. And absolutely beautifully written, apart from a few typos.
The perspective, the build up, your magnificent writing...spectacular. Hope there is more to come.
The slow, sensual build-up to something dominant and wild makes my blood sizzle. I would love to hear an audio version in that soft, commanding tone of yours.