by drakeme
Very good build-up. Liked how the shower was used as a distraction for the bad guys and that they were eventually caught. Looking forward to more of your stories. Keep up the good work!
excellent story had to read it twice Great work keep writing. 5 stars
In reading, never could get past my revulsion for the stupid little wimp of a husband. Invite two strangers on your boat with your wife? Get the two bad guys together and shoot them in the face with the flair gun? Beautiful wife married to a child. Not an enjoyable read.