All Comments on 'Sales Team'

I come back and read this every couple of months. Once of the best stories I have ever read in my life! And I read 2-3 hours a day every day.

Love this

Great story I feel good after reading that love a happy ending

Great story, love a happy ending

ok, though formulaic and somewhat corny, at least for me. keep writing!

Wonderful story. Thank you for that. I feel like a success after reading that. Congratulations!

Excellent story

Next chapter of this amazing story

About 2 pages too long. There isn't enough here to justify the length. The editors on here have no balls.

Fantastic story. I read it twice, may read it again.

Best story I have read so far, well done.

This is the fourth time I have read this - brilliant, heartwarming story, thank you.

Great story .well done.

What a great feel-good story, really enjoyed it

Beautiful story simple and elegant

This has to as one of the best storie I have read on Literotica.

Very enjoyable story.

I love a well written feel good story. Thank You

What can I say, the second time around is as good or better..

Fantastic in EVERY Way!!!

Romantique, Sweet, und Uplifting!

11/10 Service Manuals!!!!!

The best story I have read so far, well done!

This is exactly what great erotica writing is all about. Loved it!!!

5 stars for sure ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️

thax for that i needed a good one

Mary would have said, "I guess this bozo ain't as dumb as he looks!" LOL

Love the sexy romance. Well done

I’ve actually known a couple guys that hired assistants out of their own pockets to free up their time. It is fraught with perils of liability etc. but for both of them it worked well.

The story was well written in my opinion and It seemed to followed an orderly story line. I just enjoyed this author’s style and how he approached the story. I will keep an eye out for the next submission.

Great actually better than great! Second read, an story about life not just sex. The best I have had the privilege of reading.

Excellent!!! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

That was one of the best stories I’ve read on this site ever. What a beautiful love story, thank you!

Just a BIG DITTO to that the other good things others said about this story, it had it all - GOOD! 5 Stars.

Best story on the site.

Great story. Nice to see good people succeed and build a life. It was easy to stay interested all the way through and see what came next for them. Thanks for the good read.

Loved it. A great read, that held my attention from start to finish. 5 stars and a big Tank You for sharing it with us.

Loved this story! Needed a feel good story with a happy ending after reading one sad story after another.

Wow! GREAT story! Thank you for that! I can't say I can really even offer any constructive criticism. This was actually a wonderful excited story that drew me into the characters, wanting to know where they were at on a level that I have not found to be common place with online erotica. And yet, while not delivering into anything hardcore, still contained an apple sex aspect. I am very impressed. Well done.

enjoyed it thoroughly! but..."brought over a bottle of Champaign"???

It is very rare that I comment on a story and when I do it will have the highest rating I can give it. I have also read this story twice which I have never done before. This is a great story of love blossoming with a technical twist. Quite original.I will have to check out some more of this author's works again.

Thanks

Needs illustrations to go with this gem. No computers generated art, thou.... a decent artist of DC comics quality level would do.

Excellent writing style; smooth, easy reading and comprehension, and a very enjoyable and positive tale... felt real. Frankly, enjoyed the acquaintance and love story portions better than the erotica!

i love this story . it was very well thought out . i would love for this story to go on forever

A very nice, feel good romance. Well done!

Loved it. Left me feeling good.

One of my favorites on this site. Well done.

Now that was a great story

A nice story with a happy ending.

ok, but imperfect english...

Eventually, I left the bar and went to the grocery store. Two huge steaks, baking potatoes, sour cream, butter, and the ingredients for a salad seemed to be the right combination. now known as the heart attack dinner lol

Really good one.. So heartwarming and touching

Awesome story!!!

Always feel good after reading this story. Must be 5th time or more. One of the few stories where not one word or idea needs changing. TC Ireland.

TOO tell the truth I would love to read more of your works of art Honestly loved every bit of it And that comes from an old man of 63 Thank you very much

FANTASTIC STORY!! HOLLY WAS A GRATEFUL WARM INTELLIGENT CHARACTER. AT LEAST SHE DID NOT BECOME HIS COMPETITION IN THE WORK WHEN HIS BOSSES MADE HER THE OFFER!

AT LEAST WE DID NOT HAVE TO READ ABOUT ANYONE FLIRTING WITH HER WHILE TEACHING THEM.

WELL WRITTEN

Man, at several points I teared up.

This story is like a fine wine 🍷. Taste better as it ages.

Wonderful story and story telling. Nice to see a couple get together without a major disaster/misunderstanding after they’ve met.

Good build up, and nice to see one of the downtrodden people of the world get a happy ending-and not that kind!! The best stories on Lit are the love stories, and this is a great one.

Exceptional! You have a very real talent for story telling. The story was so good I read right through without pause. Thank you!

I'm only popping back to say I am no longer Anonymous. I gave it 5* on the first read and have reread it several times since. This is my go to story if I need a little bit of support to feel better, an honestly it's my favourite story. Gold standard writing.

Wonderful story. Well done!

Great story appreciated the content due to the focus being centered on a story about two people with everyday issues and problems. First time that the sex was sort of in the way of the the story. Really one of the best stories yet. Hope you can continue to present stories like this.

Freaking beautiful!!!!! One of the greatest love stories ever seen on this, the hard core cuck site. Surprised the faggots moderating the site haven't taken this gem down since there are no willing cucks involved

Second reading, 5 stars again. What else can I say!

Outstanding!

Great story. Love the ATL setting...

Excellent, well laid out and well written. A joy to read.

“… the red wine open and breathing, …” Red wine cannot "breathe" in the bottle; it needs to be decanted, or at least poured into a wide glass.

Satisfying story, but the male protagonist was too controlling. I expected Holly to pay him off and strike out on her own.

My second, or is 3 reads? No matter, I am sure tomread it again at some point. This couple, your writing, had me on a cloud, firmly believing that yes, there are still good people out there. Thank you!

I laughed. I cried. I cheered. Well done.

This was very obviously written by someone in IT. Attractive elements were written in pragmatic form, and everything was depicted in procedural, linear terms. Not only that, you’ve managed to insert your personal gripes with modern business, and enact a true fantasy of bosses listening to you and giving you money, which is even more outrageous than the woman.

Not a very hot but I loved reading it.

I loved this story, wasn't overboard with sex and it was just like a good story. I hope they write more.

Ok, I'm a softy and loved this one, but why oh why does the hero always have to fall for a beauty - I'd like to see a average looking girl win for a change (wife Linda's idea!) - or at least make the hero worker before getting into her panties! Off the soapbox now - terrific story both times I've read it.

i love the ending 😭😭😭

Terrific story, I gave it five stars.

Besides the quality of the writing (although dessert was misspelt) I've always liked stories set in a business environment.

Pity Carol never came over, or they to Carol. I think that would have added something to the story. This teetotal vegan was a bit shocked by the amount of alcohol and meat that they were putting away, but I guess it didn't really affect the story.

""The company is doing things backward. They are guessing what the customer wants and then they go to the customer and tell them this is what they want. If you went into the field with me for three days we could visit twenty or more customers and they would tell you what they really want."

Perhaps somebody should tell that to Apple, Amazon, Google and all the rest!

I get totally 'pi**ed off every time they make an 'improvement' that upsets what I need to do, because it wrecks documents, or Programs that I've painstakingly created!

This is one of my favorite stories. I hope te see more from you. Thank you so much for writing it :)

Too good Nd mixes with real life scenes. Thank you author

Beautiful story

What a wonderful story. I wish to God I find someone like Holly to spend the rest of my life with!

Hmm very nice story, I personally would have like a longer telling of their tale. Married, Superstars with the Company, end up with a big house etc..., She gets pregnant and the Company scared of losing her - offers her and him Special packages. She can work from a a full home office, and when baby (or babies) grows old enough a full time Nanny so she can make the business calls. Also extensive use of Zoom and both do bi-annual trips to head office for debriefing etc.. Maybe close on a second pregnancy where she has twins!

This is a very good tale, I've read it several times. If only there were some NEW stories to go with it! Thanks Cat, where ever you are! 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

Nice......

I loved the story, it was interesting and kept me captivated. The only negative is that I believe it was much too short. I really REALLY wanted to read more...

very readable. unfortunately the author doesn't know the difference between to lie and to lay. as well, the dreaded off of creeps in. plus, the odd superfluous of as well. three stars is generous. these are all junior high MAJOR errors.

Excellent "tear jerker". Only problem Phil mentioned his dozen condoms but yet he had unprotected sex with a woman that was undoubtedly not on birth control.

A feel good story and an enjoyable read.

Mike the Irishman 🍀

One of the best stories I have read in a long time.

Better the second time through. Added to favorites.

Write more please.

I smiled and giggled to most of this story, especially at the end. Guess I lost some man points with the giggles! Second or third read was even better than the first. Good writing!

I love this story. I've read it 3 or 4 times now. It just makes me feel good. Five blazing stars, plucked from the firmament...

A simple, happy success story ... made me tear up. 5 star.

A really, really great story. Love it from start to finish. AAAAAAA++++++

Sentimental, sexy and full of surprises!

From start to finish enjoyment flourished!

OMG what a wonderful story.

Wonderfully written. Nice mix of kindness , compassion and sex! As one whose been lifted from desperation i truly enjpyed it. Fiction or not

OK. I'm a male and don't do romance. (I know, typical male). However: I do believe you knocked this one out of the park. Wish I cold give you more than 5.

Great feel-good story.

5/5

Great story with a nice 'Feel Good' end. But why Anal? That is revolting.