All Comments on 'Sales Team'

When I need a pickup , this and Irish Eyes do the trick. Wonderful. TC ireland.

Very well put together, great plot progression and character development, I absolutely loved it! 5*

Add another chapter please

Great story thanks .. I really enjoyed it ..

Fuck Phil. Ofc things worked out well in the end but i feel her potential was stifled from the start, recognizing her grades and abilities. Undertone of the story was unenjoyable bc of it.

A great story, one I've enjoyed many times. Would love to see something new but after all this time it probably won't happen - our lose for sure. 5 stars.

somewhere east of Omaha

You know, it' super refreshing to read a story like this, the sexual tension and naughtiness is in there, as to be expected on this site, but it's wrapped up in such a heartwarming little story with two characters you genuinely come to like. Well done.

OH WOW AMAZING (sorry to spoil it but dessert is spelt wrongly

I love this story...

Five stars - and five boxes of Kleenex :-)

What's not to love about a very good love story...............

cooorny 'merrican

Words don't do this story justice, absolutely stunning and such an incredible work! You have an amazing talent for writing and thank-you for sharing!

This story was great. 10/10

It's was a good story but I don't think this was the place for it . I could be wrong but I think people who come to this place to read a story want a bit more from what they read here. But I must say it was one of the best written stories I have read.❗

I love a good story that leads into amazing sexual experiences! This was one I could truly picture in my head and feel (how stories should be) . I could not put it down and was eager to find out the ending. Kudos to your talent

Finally, a great one.

why do i read this shit?...one star is way too many...

I really liked this story...second read.

ok ...with caveats.

This was a big step for Nancy and I ???... grammar! a big step for i??

bottle of Champaign?? ´murrican drink?

I see this is a contest winner. Well deserved. And enjoyed!

Favorited. Thanks for sharing! 5* Slainté

Wonderful, well paced, thoughful, kind and sexy........

Thank yoy

5 stars ... strong character develolment, romantic and realistic.

I love this story. Two people who deserve each other.

One of my favorites on here! Well written, original storyline! Thank you for a delightful read!

This was a wonderful read, a great feel-good story. At one point I was worried that Holly's success would drive a wedge between them. But Phill wasn't jealous, he wanted what was best for Holly and Holly wanted Phill. How does that saying go about nice guys finishing, where? 5 stars

i really enjoyed this story from start to finish. real life, down to earth, the 'key' being believable. Cat, don't change your writing if this is a sample of it. The best fiction is fiction that is believable which makes the story enjoyable. I will now attempt to follow up on your other stories if available. JK

I don’t know if you still monitor replies. No matter. First, the story is brilliant! I guess, since you have written in 11 years, I’m a little late to the party, but that’s not unusual for me. I’m glad it’s still here for all of us, especially me. It’s what I needed today. Well done and thank you.

I have enjoyed this story a couple of times as anonymous. This is a fantastic feel good story and is well written!!! Thank You for sharing this wonderful story!

An excellent story of love and passionate romance, with A minimum erotic content😀

Heart warming and wonderful. A tale of triumph and success. Could us a little more sex but still 5/5.

Sweet. Superb .

Loved it.

Kudos.

More such please

Regards

First it is a great love story from beginning to the end marriage. Clearly you thought out the complete story and molded the characters to the story line perfectly. Will add you as a follower and check out some of your earlier stories. Clearly one of the most enjoyable I have read in a long time. Thank you

somewhat corny?...

champain?? us english, i´d say...

Well written but a bit long. The sex should have started earlier.

Fantastic. By one of the great writers here and never fails to give me enjoyment. The end was a little fast but minor compared withe the rest of the story. Definitely one of my favourites.

Loved it

My New Favorite story. I kept thinking that something was going to happen and Phil would end up loosing Holly. I was very glad that it ended the way it did. They could even use the Maui meeting as a free honeymoon.

Legit, this would make a great movie

Really well done. Even a crusty old guy like me enjoyed it. Top Marks.

Always love a good romance story of two people who make each other better. Excellent story.

A good story but 4 stars cause it seemed just a little sappy!

Great ending, good plot & well done everything.

5 stars

Bill

Just awesome! Wonderful story. Makes you feel tingly!

I kept waiting for the shoe to fall and bring it all down but, thankfully, it never did. Thank you for writing a story about nice people who do nice things for one another. Too bad they limit ratings to only five stars - LOL!

Two good people ending happy and together makes a great romance story

I really enjoyed your story and appreciate your writing style. The weekly change in agenda was a clever way to develop their relationship. The only thing I didn't like was the abrupt introduction of anal sex. It seemed out of place in this relationship and I would doubt that this smart young woman would draw target circles on her ass with a permanent red marker if she had a virgin ass. But other than that, congrats and well done!

Great story! Loved it. Sucker for stories with happy people.

Yes I enjoyed this story, usually my favorite reads are some build up or plausible scenarios that feed fantasy or fetish of some kind, not necessarily mine because I enjoy understanding what turns others on. I really enjoyed this story about them building a wonderful relationship together with just enough of the description of their sexual relationship. Great read. Thanks

Came back to rate it.

Loved it, as I do many of your stories.

I’m a sucker for a happy ending...🥰 5

Very touching and very arousing. You made the images come alive in my imagination. Well done

I loved this story! Ok. I'm a believer (follower).

He didn't even fix her a bowl of eggs.....

This was a fun story! I came across it because it was in the "Similar Stories" list of one of mine. 5*.

Great story

Very well written. As predictable as Christmas and just as heart warming.

I must have done something right today. This is the second story about a down and out woman who found love. I think these are actually my favorite type. No cuck. No btb. Just two broken humans reaching out and finding love.

A very good story from a very good writer! Please return with some new stories or at least let us know you are still out there. There are a few cases where bonus stars are needed. Thank you for your effort.

I needed a good story about good people, so I re-read this one. Mission accomplished.

Thank you, this was a gift......

SIX STARS

Five Stars

Love this one. Again! It’s my favourite reread!!

Sweet story very nicely paced and told....and you obviously know selling software!

I am so devastated that I can only give this story 5 stars. Probably the very best one I have read here.

I love a happy ending.

Interesting story

Lovely

That was a really nice story, well written and well done.

A nice easy and entertaining read! Sequel??

Sometimes a company gets it right! Great story and the sensual interaction wasn't bad either! lol!

GOD!!!!! PHIL SHUT UP!!!!

My wife worked for years as an SVP in customer service and IT support and when I showed her this story she said she woulda killed for a sales team that smart ... lol 😂 talk about fiction

I absolutely loved this story, it was more than just constant sex. Don’t get me wrong, I do enjoy that story from time to time. But I really truly enjoyed this story.

I should have paid to read this wonderful story. Bravo.

Author, thank you.

im happy there was other stuff in it not just shitty mindless sex. its great that they actually had a bond

I love it

I have been longing to read such stories for more than a month . Actually the main thing is most of their writers here some what concreteise the sexual part more than the living that happens after the sexual event . Really loved ur story ❤️ waiting for more to read.

Thanks for a wonderful, feel good story. Total five star effort.

Great story, well written, interesting characters and a happy ending !

Who could ask for more ?

Well, I could. More of the same please !

Really good story,don't find many as good as this.

This is the best story of this kind I've ever read. It actually had a plot and real people . . . please, more.

What a nice story. It had me cheering for the underdog. I'm a hopeless romantic and this one touched my heart. Five well-deserved stars.

This was, I think,third time-1st was a long time ago-still think it's fantastic, pity can't vote again.

Love the characters(esp love strong smart resourceful women ),and dialogue-going into my all-time best folder....

And very well written too

This is a complete story. Love the premise, love the build, it has a quick but significant first pinch point, an amazing transition. The sex, in the story makes perfect sense, it belongs in the character development. There are side stories that are interesting, and it has a realistic ending.

This could easily be a novel length story.

I loved it from start to finish !!! The story I wished would happen to me

Well written and a great story line. It just don't get any better than this. A love story that has a happy ending. Gets my 5 star vote.

I am a man that believes a relationship is a working team not one person to be the boss. Although, I know that it is that way in some cases. I did enjoy the story except for the "boss" part.

He kept her as a slave manipulated her sense of obligation and tied her down to marriage at 23?! She could have gone to a refuge for real support with no strings attached. Rape victims don’t get cured by being further endebted manipulated etc. No one is cured from crippling trauma by ‘hero’ entitled males financial manipulation and grooming. This is horrible. Hope she dumps him and realises she’s better off on her own.

Awesome, Excellent story!!! I need a woman like her!!!

My finger just slipped and I gave one star to the story instead of five. And I can't change it now. The website doesn't allow. I'm sorry.

I really liked the story. Kind of a fairy tale for the girl to find her knight in shining armour and for the boy to find his damsel in distress. Flow of the story was good and the last sentence ended it on high note.

Keep it up.

Viraj

Just a great story! I love the last line!!

Not what I expected, but a pleasant surprise

Not what I expected, but it is the absolute best story I have read in many years.

Great story and nicely done. Thank you for your efforts in contributing such a great, memorable read.

That is one of the best stories I've read. The story flowed perfectly. Really heartwarming about two people helping each other.bqTp57

I loved this. What else can I say? I leave short comments for good stories, and long comments shredding bad ones. This is probably the shortest comment I've ever left.