by nassanuk
this story doesnt even make sense, it tells nothing of what the hubby does about it or what. i didnt even finish reading, it was that bad
I don't know what the other reader was objecting to. You didn't go into unnecessary details about the husband and that is good. It would have detracted from the focus point of the story: the wife's first double-team.
The sex scenes were hot and described very well, I could see it happening in my mind as I read it. This is the first story of yours that I've read, but I'm going to look for more.
By the way, the sponteniety in the story was wonderful! What woman wouldn't want to take those two young men inside and fuck them both?!
The story would have been much more erotic if Sally had been urgently waiting for her husband to get home (and he did not) so she and her husband could possibly start a baby inasmuch as she was ovulating, and those two teenaged studs came over and fucked her barebacked instead....
The script was followed jollie well mate - shame you couldn't watch on your anniversery and all.
Read the one posted immediately below it, same day, in the Anal section.
You would have us think that wives are just sluts that are ready to get an std, pass it on to the husband, get pregnant by the village idiot who happens to have a thirteen inch cock but has an iq of 51,
Now maybe wives do fuck others besides their husband and the husbands do jerk off to it. But really isn't your story the kind that should be in scfi or far out fairy tales...?
I loved it. I was cumming as I read your story. wishing it was me getting doublely filled
JOAN @ THE JERSEY SHORE
All the stories are about slut wife!!! All women are sluts, whores get paid for sex, sluts give it away!!!
My wife and I were trying to sleep one night about 11:00 and the neighbors had their music turned up loud with a party in their backyard. I offered to go over but my wife decided to give them a piece of her mind instead. She left and the music dropped in volume, enough that I drifted off to sleep. I was awoken latter, about 3:30 according to the clock, by my wife slipping back into bed. Well, there was no way I was falling back asleep without an explanation. She told me that the party was for our neighbor’s son, Eric, who just graduated. When my wife showed up, many of the people left. Eric was a bit upset with her and she said she would drink a beer with him and his three friends that were left. Apparently all of the boys were a bit drunk already and kept commenting on Tiff’s attire. She had gone over in her pyjamas, that were a thin tank top and boy shorts. They were all telling her how hot she looked and she admitted it was turning her on. Then one of his friends said that she should give Eric a lap dance for a graduation present. She agreed to sitting on his lap and giving him a kiss. They passed out shots and she had one with them. She said she could feel Eric getting hard beneath her and decided to mess with him. A sexy song began playing and she started to shimmy her ass in his lap. Basically giving him the lap dance anyway. About halfway through the song she turned around to face him and he started to rub his hands up her sides and then on her tits. Before she knew it her top was raised and he had his lips on her nipple. She said she just got into it and soon reached down between them and pulled his dick out of his pants. She turned with her back facing him and slid down on his dick. She looked at the other guys and whipped her top over her head. She told me that she gave each boy a lap dance that included penetration and that two of them had her suck them off as well.