by ElizaMix
I have really enjoyed this entire story. You have a talent for meshing wit, emotion and sex in a pared down fashion that pulls one in and makes for a good read. Looking forward to reading more from you. Excellent job!
I have enjoyed the story, but it feels like you left it open to a possible revisit in the future. Maybe you could start with how she finally matured while at college, how their relationship grows, and how she gets her retribution against her parents. As I say, this still feels like it could be revisited and expanded upon in the future, and I hope you will.
Bravo. Not only did you make the characters come alive, you developed the story from one of sex to one of romance. And the end.... Bravo. Couldn't have been more perfect.
Thank you for this really enjoyable story. Well written with very few typos. I really like your work.
Pay no mind to the unenlightened "unfinished" comments. Fantastic. Just freakin' fantastic.
Both of your stories have been extremely enjoyable. I hope that you find the time to write more.
Amazingly written, even some funny moments, it had references and was hot while still being reflective over the fact that what he did (in the beginning at least) was wrong.
Just great in all.
The characters really have personalities and do other things then just fucking. I liked the awkward jokes the teacher made, it made him more "recognizable" and felt more like a teacher on has actually had.
In summary, good job! I liked it.
Thanks anon!
Your kind words encourage me to keep writing :]
In fact, I've put my next erotica in my writing line-up. Gonna be awesome~
I was just looking for a rough story when I came across this. Those are always the best. The ones you fall into. Your characterization is amazing. The plot flows well and is believable... and doesn't jump from conceivable to inconceivable like I have seen many authors do. You took your time and put out something worthy of ours. Good job!
As a former teacher who fell in love with one of my art students every 8-10 years (BUT NEVER TOUCHED ONE) I understand your longing for the one that “got away”. To that degree, the ending touched me deeply.