All Comments on 'Sandie'

I think this story was so exciting. It made me hot and wet, so you did your job. ; )

Of course he would use a condom.

He clearly enjoyed her body, but awaited Mom.

Not a bad read (for the most part) when not distracted by all the problems shown that deal the the mechanics of grammar. Lots of punctuation problems. Misspelled/misused words.

Find a good editor and do some more, please.

wonderfully written with the perfect ending.