All Comments on 'Santa's Naughty Aunts Ch. 04'

well-done!

I liked the end but i hoped that timmy would have had a threesome with his aunts after their divorces but anyway if this had really happened to you then your lucky cuz this was extremely hot!

Who is Holly, and where did she come from? What does she have with the story line or is it that you just couldn't figure out a way to tie up all the loose ends you created for yourself?

p.s. you forgot the initial premise in the non ending

well done, liked the story and you had to end it somehow, which was fine-

loved the hot sex all through it-nicely written [with some laugh out loud passages in each chapter] thanks

it would have been nice if he had both aunts at once to end it. oh well.

I liked the entire series and liked the ending, I read the older story awhile ago and glad that I ran across it again. Thanks

I didn't expect a 3-some with the Aunts; but in a way I thought that he might end up with Billie, they liked each other - whereas the other Aunt was only about sex.

Overall of course it would have been problematic so Holly coming into the picture ties up the loose ends & gives him a future with a very nice woman with which he can raise a family. ... DKP

Read the entire series.....very nice

The series was great and the happy ending worked well. Five stars.

Thanks for writing!

Let me be clear: I really enjoyed the first three chapters of this series, as well as the beginning of Chapter 4, but...

Maybe it's just me, but you could have ended this chapter & the story at

"A long, hot shower would help, I thought, and I headed off for the bathroom."

That would have been a sad ending, but much better than the sappy, syrupy, lived-happily-ever-after ending that followed. This site is for erotica, not a romance novel.

P.S. I've read a lot of what you've posted and enjoyed every one of the stories. And left 5 star ratings, too. Even this one.

Delightful read. Fucking hot. I like your writing which is peppered with a fair amount of humour.

But I agree with the comment of riverottee1948. There was no need to stretch the story to a fairy tale ending artificially. You could have stopped at the point of his ending affairs with his aunts or at the latest, at the point of meeting his new girlfriend and discovering that they were both interested in each other. Taking it through marriage, honeymoon and pregnancy waa a waste. Just my view.

You seemed to have stopped writing to Literotica. Why? Wish you would restart.

Disagreements on stories is normal. I thought your story was excellent and I loved the happy ending!

Hmmmmm, ending was rushed