All Comments on 'Saor Alba'

You're the best of us here, and this is well up to your best standard. I am moved to lust and delight and admiration and a little envy.

Bravo!

You've done it again. Superb writing. And set in Scotland too! You have been well advised, and the result is a formidable story.

SW, this is just stunning. I couldn't breathe when I finished. Seriously. Heart pounding, drenched, hanging onto the table lest I have an attack of the vapors. Or something. A profound pleasure to have read this, and I know I will do so again.

I read a page and was bored shitless.

tells us more about the poor state of her/his mind than it does about this amazing story.

This is the first submission of yours that I've come across - and I loved it. Can't wait to check out the rest of your work!

Five stars,

AH

The 'exigesis' should have included some advice on spelling.

You're absolutely correct, Anonymous. That should read "exegesis." Good catch! and thanks. :)

--SW

I feel privileged to be present in it.

Jings, I'd forgotten how utterly awsome this story is! I cannot think of a better expression of simply outrageously hot sex. Congratulations once again (and you, like me, should write more).