All Comments on 'Sara and Daddy 69'

Leaving the obvious editing that is missing out of the discussion, the story didn't flow. Yes, the father has been doing things, and the daughter has been thinking things, but it should have been a slower build up.

As a 21 year old girl who lusts for her father, I can't ever imagine him just shoving his hands between my legs. I am considering seducing him, haha.

Here is an example of your dialogue: "You like that, daddy? You like my ass in your face, grabbing my tits, sniffing your daughters wet cunt before plumetting your stiff rod inside her?" No one in the history of the planet has ever talked like that. It is so stilted, so unrealistic. The previous comment is 100% correct. The story lacks any build to the sexual tension; this is not erotic fiction, it is just a fuck story . . . but I have read many worse stories. You can do better.

i want my dad so bad i also masturbate every night. i hear him n bitch mum fucking every few weeks. i want to walk right in their room and tell daddy to just tke me making e his slut. Im stacy, btw @stacy18_bi@hotmail.com if you wanta chat, i also love watchin my dad get hardon spying on me while i sit n watch tv. i know he's eyeing my ass n legs cuz im 5'10" tall and he's told me before im all legs n ass...yummmmmmmmmmmm

Im so wet right now. I need to be fucked

So fucking hot!!! yummy daddy

i like it, just needs to be a bit longer

I hope you do a part 2. I'd love to hear how the rest of the night went and the days to follow before mommy gets home. Wanna hear about you riding that cock.

A girls first love is her daddy, i loved mine so much it hurt hearing him fucking mom, when she was out i would flirt and tease daddy, but he never let his guard down. then i had my time, mom went to look after grandma for a few weeks, i took dad out for ameal and got him a little drunk, back home i just stripped off and said "Fuck me daddy"

WOW it was better than i could have imagined. we fuck all the time now and it's just a good as the first time.