All Comments on 'Sarah's Awakening'

Not realistic, but who cares? I enjoyed the romp and if Sarah has more than an awakening she'd best find a way for hubby to stay on a business trip for the summer.

Can anyone write a more sad and depressing story?

I appreciate story development - but you appear to be paid by the word. No need to say the idea in 10 words when 50 or more will do. Plus the 50 does not better express the idea. I read the whole thing and the best part was when it was over so I could spend my time elsewhere. Why make the read endure this?

I agree with the other comment, very good story but unnecessarily wordy. Why spend 50 words when 10 just as good. But good story development.

This story is perfect for a large titted neighbour t join the fun

See, ya never know, even after all these years, a new reader finds you! Fun story, delicious romp. Pay no mind to those snobby critics who hide behind their anonymity, let’s see if they ever did any better. Keep writing my friend! Some of us get hot and wet from the idea of incest.

The absolute worst thing a mother could do is fuck her son's friend or friends This left me a little cold.