All Comments on 'Sarah's Education'

luv a happy ending sweetie

Gentle new love, so well expressed.

Thankyou

great story , i hope there is a sequel lol , Sarah dumping her boyfriend , coming out , and more lesbian sex to come i hope

I have to wonder , who seduced who. Lol

To everyone, reality raises its head. Sarah knew something was amiss, (Physical/Mental or both). She tackled the problem with a friend as candidly as her personality would allow it. I'm not sure how you can continue this story and maintain the slow warmth that you've created with it. They are soon to go their separate ways! Your story was soft, warm and erotic. It touched on portions of my own experience. I loved it!

Really well written, very believable, and HOT!

The intensity climbed at a perfect pace. It was a very enjoyable read.

I loved the apprehension.

I loved the role change from seducer to submissive.

Thank you.

"Sarah's Education"

I think this story stands up all by itself. When I finished reading this story, I had a strong desire to see what would happen next. Walt Disney a Wise showman said, "Leave them wanting more". All those wonderful animated features ended leaving the viewer wanting more. Think about it.

The warmth and glow you generated with "Sarah's Education" I think comes under the heading of first love or crush. You pretty much closed the story with the

protagonist's thoughts and feelings about Sarah. Nothing more needed to be said.

"You have left me wanting more." I want the old "E" Ticket ride. (Disneyland)

Finally, one absolutely perfect story, and I did not even have to correct grammar. t was way too short, so much more to come. Please continue it.

A threesome with Scott may be the way to go ;)

The thoughts and feelings of the narrator really made this story. The narration gave the story a realism that is missing in most erotica.

Enjoyable story. You do have a problem using "site" for "sight" though.

As someone above has noted, there is no need for a sequel. The story stands as is, and should stay that way. My imagination is filling in extra details.

Fantastically sweet and well written story. Really enjoyed the read!

Giving your friend a lesson is the best way to go

And really well written. You created two believable real characters, which is a big deal. Thanks.

Good story! There should be no threesome with Scott though, he couldn't even make his girlfriend have an orgasm so what in the world would he do with two women. The girls would have to do everything. He would prob just watch and masturbatte if he can find his own penis cause it obviously isn't that big.

The description of Sarah's body, and then getting her off, for her first time, and then Sarah returning the favor...gawd!

I have known many women who could not let themselves have an orgasm..

simply beautiful, hope there is a future there

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Loved these two girls, with their sweet, intimate friendship! Great story, perfect ending.

By the way, dual means two of something, but duel is two guys in white wigs and fancy suits walking 10 paces away from each other, then turning and shooting. In the 1600s. :D

Maybe he didn’t make her orgasm, maybe it turns out she was gay all along, but surely she knew she had a clit and where it was.

Very sweet story.

Beautifully Erotic and arousing, so loved your detail of your own excitement and arousal, your voice and style are so hot, i'm hard as a rock right now, so well written, I could almost taste your fingers, I bet she taste's your fingers and pussy the next time....delicious...desert...Thanks for sharing your incredible talent!!