by The Story Teller
I hope there are more stories by you here, and I plan to look now. I further hope there is the continuing saga of Sarah and Brae... maybe with Dominic for an entertaining threesome. Keep up the good work.
Honey, I've read a great deal on literotica and your work is my personal top five!!! Keep it up, this story is great. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Great, except all the "baby" really detracted from the sensuousness of this piece and just made it comical. Omit those from the dialogue and you have a really sexy story.
I do agree that the baby throws it off a little... if hes really that old try an a endearment in french but then again that is kinda what Laurell k hamilton or anne rice would do... Execept for that I love it truley well written catches you up.. ever write a book let me know I would love to own it.. thunderstruck50@hotmail.com
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Renee'
...or guy i guess.
supernatural/fantasy has always been a turn on regardless of it being more mainstream now and this is a fun story to get a release from reality. i didnt really understand the time its set in though but ill keep reading.