All Comments on 'Sarah's Story Ch. 03'

by True.Brit

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shagalotshagalotover 13 years ago
Dissapointed ;(

I felt this chapter was rushed and unplanned , hence my mark of 4 , but i hope there is more to come in the very near future , keep it up though im sure it will get back to the quality and quantity of the first 2 chapters xx

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Incomplete

This chapter seemed kinda rush. Almost as if you started a chapter but never finished it. Don't rush yourself, take your time and write a chapter you would want to read. I'll be watching for Chapter 4.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
So damned hot.

My two girl friends and I creamed our brains out, then we fucked ourselves stupid, more please lots more

charliebillcharliebillalmost 9 years ago
How would this feel?

As an adult hetero man, I am curious how this would feel. Interesting to speculate how that would feel as it began going up into me?

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a3 months ago

I find it hard to believe that a mature, well educated person could not reason the problem for herself. Liked the chapter; however, at this point in time, I do not see the necessity for its existence.

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