All Comments on 'Saturday Morning Ritual'

by ShelbyNaughtyGirl

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PolyLvrPolyLvrabout 12 years ago
Oh! My! God!

Simply beautiful.

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 12 years ago
Very hot

A well written story. I'd like to read more about these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Loved it

So refreshing to read a story where the guy doesn't have a 14 inch anaconda in his pants and she didn't have watermelons on her chest. Keep on writing my friend

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
NICE

NEXT WEEK? 3 MONTHS LATER SURPRISE

ChasBChasBover 11 years ago

Not terribly real, but a lovely idea!

sycodavsycodavover 11 years ago
wowsers

Very erotic you have a wonderful talent

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yummmm

Delicious! Very well written with a good mix of dialog and descriptive writing.

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchabout 11 years ago

I thought is was an ok story. It was very visual in the beginning (seeing up her tennis skirt!) Tennis skirts are insanely sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
"Blair could never in a million years have imagined his proper little sister on her knees worshiping his cock."

Funny that he can't imagine it, since that's exactly the right position for a kid sister to be with her big brother's cock. I like the comment to this excellent story of the reader who wrote "Nice." It'd be perfect if Blair fucked a baby up his sister's cute little twat.

unicorn64unicorn64over 10 years ago

Had me wet it was so good. Will there be more?

teddybearclubteddybearclubover 10 years ago
Thats it

Up against the fence. Or a wall. The door. Hot. I loved it.

beaniebashambeaniebashamover 10 years ago
amazing

I loved the story. I was rubbing my pussy the whole time I was reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
so-so

just couldn't hold my interest the part at the tennis court was boring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Feels so nice

My big brother and I have experienced incest together and I must admit it's so erotic looking between your legs and seeing your big brothers head between them licking your wet pussy!! We haven't fucked yet but I have begged him! hopefully we will get to fuck each other soon mmmm can't wait to feel my big brothers cock inside me OMG I'm sooo wet!!!!

Will6969doWill6969doover 9 years ago
Incest is very nice

And the way you wrote about it I'm sure you liked it quite often

DrhwnoelDrhwnoelover 7 years ago
not too bad

Short, sweet and very erotic. A few grammatical errors that could have been easily corrected, but all in all it was an enjoyable tale.

dietz10000dietz10000about 6 years ago
Never Knew

I never knew that tennis was such a great game

I feel I've been wasting my time playing golf with the guys

69erfan69erfanabout 6 years ago
Ground stroking

I think I'd enjoy playing tennis with you!

kclovinkclovinover 1 year ago

An absolute classic!!!

kclovinkclovinover 1 year ago

An absolute classic!!!!

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