by joe_of_diamonds
with the comment about the length of the chapters, I still think you are a hell of a writer. As the sun started getting high, I could almost smell the scent of the dumpster they were parked behind. Really fine tale.
I really enjoyed reading this story so far. I can't wait to read the remaining chapters.
I liked this story and the way its going. You are a very good writer. You've got a hand on this. Your style is superb. My only complain is that your chapters are too short. Please try to make them longer. Hope the next chapters in the series will be posted soon.