All Comments on 'Savannah 03'

I liked it very much - I'll have to go back and play catch-up on Chaps 1 & 2...

Only concern was some of the descriptions: "Fuck" has been around since the 1500's, though I don't know how many refined Ladies of the Victorian period would even know the word, let alone be comfortable using it - is her background raunchy..?? - "Cum" I think is very much a modern terminology - "Climax" might have been more appropriate, if you are going to present the story as "Victorian"...(It was known as "Hysteria" by a lot of Doctors of the period.)..

But, good stuff; an intriguing story that has plenty of potential...so keep it up...

LR

have just finished all 3 chapters and i totally enjoyed it - well done

I felt a jolt in my groin, well cock actually when I saw Georgie had published Sav3. It kept jolting as I devoured every word,

It blows my mind to imagine:

1. Just where this incredrible tale will take me and

2. Just what Georgie can be like. I mean a woman who can write so eloquently about so many aspecrs of sex in such an erotic manner really must be something else.

I think I love you Georgie and please rush Sav 4 onto here.

Chapter 1 is still the best. Interesting dramatic story.

More nitpicking, I see.

For me, you have developed the story incredibly well and the 'bawdy romp' is gathering pace with every fabulous page. It is as satisfying to read as it must have been to write. Brilliant stuff :)

Continues to give a great history lesson on real facts pertaining to slavery and the Civil War, while weaving a engrossing story. So well-written.