All Comments on 'Saved for Another Day'

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JuliaHandelJuliaHandelalmost 11 years ago
Clear and cleanly written

Story of a woman’s fantasy has dialogue that makes it realistic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
liked it...a lot

You set the scene well. I have been in 'his' shoes and 'her' mind, with all the a-n-t-i-c-i-p-a-t-i-o-n clouded by the million thoughts and colliding emotions....and parting ways with a hint of what's to be, but not giving in to the night's temptation because it might bruise the future. Very nice.

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