by bawidgetcoms
Story of a woman’s fantasy has dialogue that makes it realistic.
You set the scene well. I have been in 'his' shoes and 'her' mind, with all the a-n-t-i-c-i-p-a-t-i-o-n clouded by the million thoughts and colliding emotions....and parting ways with a hint of what's to be, but not giving in to the night's temptation because it might bruise the future. Very nice.