All Comments on 'Saving the Catwoman'

Quick fun and sexy story. Thanks!

Cracking little tale!

If Mason and Katie are both naked where did this condom come from?

Loved your story, as always. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Another great story Ada. Am a bit annoyed as I missed a couple of things reviewing it for you.

A very tender romance, with a nice edge of cheekiness.

Sex scene evocative of mutual hunger, but actual act was overly rushed and somewhat brutal, that disturbed the balance of the narrative.

Four stars

What a fantastic sexy story. Absolutely love it!

Thank you for sharing

Tess (UK)

Heartwarming.

Fun. Light. Enjoyable.

Thank you.

Fun characters, cute plot, great love scenes, thanks for a perfect quick read :)

This is such a wonderful and tender love story. It is long in coming, as your story hints that there is a strong romantic interest on both sides. Mason seems such a great neighbor, a fine fireman, and an eager and qualified lover. When she orders him to "strip," I thought he'd reveal a bit of a sexy hairy chest to display for her. She does kiss his his chest and suck at his nipples -- imagine if there is chest hair there that she can get wet with her saliva. It is sexy for them! He loves her and makes no bones about that.

Please let this be the beginning of a fine romance for the two of them. Katie tracing her fingers through his sexy chest hair, and perhaps sucking his cock at the same time -- breathtaking!

Nice short story but, enjoyable.

A nice little tale.

Thank You

HP

Yes this is short and funny. You did it, now... I want more. Hehe.

Trotz der Kürze bekommen die beiden Protagonisten so viel Profil, dass es ein wahres Vergnügen ist, sie auf ihrem Weg zum glücklichen Ende zu begleiten.

Die "Rettungsaktion" aus dem Baum ist sehr, sehr gut beschrieben.

He sounds like a hottie, definitely kept my attention

I wonder if the entire neighborhood was trying to play matchmaker with them.

"cf12: Quick fun and sexy story. Thanks!"

- You're most welcome - and thanks for the nice comment 😁❤️

"Anonymous: Cracking little tale!"

- Thanks ❤️ I had plenty of ideas for a long one (as usual), but I would never have finished if I didn't start over with this short one instead. But next time....😁 it will be a long one 😁

"Anonymous: condom from where?

If Mason and Katie are both naked where did this condom come from?"

- Oops - I think you found the first plothole 😁 Thanks ❤️ I'll fix it!

"Anonymous: My 2 cents

Loved your story, as always. Thanks for your time and imagination."

- Awww, thank you so much 😁❤️ I still wish I could have shown you a full-length story, but my mind has been occupied with my first full-length werewolf story for some reason. And I don't argue too much when my mind wants to go somewhere, LOL

"Ravey19: Lovely Short Story

Another great story Ada. Am a bit annoyed as I missed a couple of things reviewing it for you."

- Haha, always the editor, Ravey19! Don't worry - I always include plenty of errors so I'm very happy for all the others you caught for me ❤️

"Anonymous: SAVING THE CATWOMAN

A very tender romance, with a nice edge of cheekiness.

Sex scene evocative of mutual hunger, but actual act was overly rushed and somewhat brutal, that disturbed the balance of the narrative.

Four stars"

- I'm not surprised. The short format often makes it difficult to work in all the details I like to include. I'm very intrigued about your comments about the sex scene. Thanks ❤️ I will have a look and make improvements on that one. I want to make a longer version of this story so I'm very curious to learn what works and what doesn't work so well. Anyway, thank you so much ❤️

"Tess (UK): Your talent shines through

What a fantastic sexy story. Absolutely love it!

Thank you for sharing

Tess (UK)"

- Haha, Tess 😁❤️ You are always much too kind to me, but I appreciate it as always ❤️

"jmmj5: Heartwarming.

Fun. Light. Enjoyable.

Thank you."

- You're most welcome ❤️ I did actually tried to write something darker and scarier this time, but I just couldn't. I'll leave that to the experts😁

"Anonymous: Charming and steamy read!

Fun characters, cute plot, great love scenes, thanks for a perfect quick read :)"

- Wow, thanks 😁❤️ But I still can't resist expanding it one day. I have so many hot scenes that I really wanted to include.... Uhm, well, next time 😁

"Anonymous: Wonderful!

This is such a wonderful and tender love story. It is long in coming, as your story hints that there is a strong romantic interest on both sides. Mason seems such a great neighbor, a fine fireman, and an eager and qualified lover. When she orders him to "strip," I thought he'd reveal a bit of a sexy hairy chest to display for her. She does kiss his his chest and suck at his nipples -- imagine if there is chest hair there that she can get wet with her saliva. It is sexy for them! He loves her and makes no bones about that.

Please let this be the beginning of a fine romance for the two of them. Katie tracing her fingers through his sexy chest hair, and perhaps sucking his cock at the same time -- breathtaking!"

- Cool! I love your ideas! And I'm so annoyed I didn't think of it sooner. Thank you so much for the wonderful advice 😁❤️ Now I just have to make a longer version, LOL

"Anonymous: Nice

Nice short story but, enjoyable."

- Aww, thanks 😁❤️ I'm so glad you liked it even if it's a lot shorter than what I usually deliver to a contest 😄

"Anonymous: Short & Sweet

A nice little tale.

Thank You

HP"

- Wow, thanks 😁❤️ This time I had to choose between posting a short story or not post at all. I have to admit that I'm astounded by all the votes and comments I've received. And I'm so inspired to write more stories. Thank you so much 😁❤️

Ada

Great story!!

It is refreshing to read a well constructed love story by an author that knows and understands the words she's using.

Another one of Ada's that I liked

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I did like the way our two danced tentatively towards each other, with neither wanting to make a really big move. It happens so often with each dancer scared that too big a move will frighten his/her partner dancer away. The reader knows, the characters know, but there's always the fear that somebody may make the wrong move and it will all come undone.

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A nicely constructed romance.

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Lue

Loved the way the love sean went but the bit about the condom spoiled it ,to lovers getting carried way with him cumming deep inside her would have been much better.

No babies on this site

Old man was a fireman. Whenever he got a cat call he would ask: Have you ever seen a cat skeleton in a tree? Ans: No That is because when they get hungry, the come down.

"Yes this is short and funny. You did it, now... I want more. Hehe."

- And your wish has been fulfilled, LOL. I've just published an extended (and completely rewritten) version of this story. It's titled "Burn" - well, I had to since Mason is a firefighter, 😁❤️

- And to all my readers who were kind enough to add comments and send me feedback: Thank you so much ❤️ The story became so much better thanks to you 😄

Une bonne dose d'humour, de le sensualité et de l'érotisme. en plus il y a un chat! Merci Ada

Love it, please write more about these two.

Loved it so much

I love this story. Is there really an alternate/extended story called "Burn"? Where can I read that?

To RomanceLives from Ada Stuart:

Absolutely :-) I just liked the characters so much that I couldn't let them go, so I wrote an extended version with the title 'Burn'. It's available on all the sites where I publish my ebooks.

The easiest is to check out my webpage where you can find excerpts and direct links to all the sites (you can find the link to my webpage on my Biography page here on Literotica or just send me Feedback and I can send you the link). Hope it works out, and sorry that I can't add the link here :-)

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