by steves_mom
Please don't stop adding these stories. I'm hooked on them. I want to see what Charlie will convince Nina to do next.
This exactly what I want in a "text with audio" story. An actual story read by a nice sexy voice who is getting aroused whit her story. I wish I could find more of this type. I've listened to the three in this series and would love to hear momre.
Daaaammn... made my night! Beautiful. I only have a few pieces of constructive criticism:
1) MAKE IT LONGER--- the story ends right as I'm just beginning to climb the ladder
To my orgasm. I lost it, and as a reader I'm kinda left
Being sexually frustrated. Maybe you could do an uncut Long-form version where you put all of "Saving The Sexy Parts" together.
2) ACCURACY--- I hate to say it, but no one cums that fast in real life. Describe the
Orgasm, after all, it is the 'climax' of your story (puns) let us savor it
That's all I've got to say, gurl you got a voice like frosting: sweet and smooth. You're also an amazing author! Looking foreword to more of your work!