All Comments on 'Saying Stay Ch. 01'

On the last page Matt couldn't put sheets over him because he had not unpacked them yet. A few sentences later he ejaculates partly on his sheets??, the ones that were still in a carton.

This story was a really nice effort. It has a different perspective than any other story on here. The main character was very relatable and one could easily imagine themselves being a reluctant participant in what sounds like what will be a great, adventurous, living situation. Nice job. I look forward to many subsequent chapters.

Good story! Can't wait for the sequels!!

Very well written, in the easy, conversational style of a young man, and in very decent English, too. Rare are the writers on this site who can distinguish "to lie" (lying, lay, lain) from "to lay" (laying, laid, laid) and conjugate both correctly. I do think, however, that in connection with the preposition "with" the objective case is to be preferred: "play Hale with Josh and (with) me", rather than "play Hale with Josh and I".

Eager to see next chapter!

Freaking awesome. What a sexy, involving read. Love the characters, gheir quirks & flaws & sensuousness. What a delightful, addicting read. LingerieRobot, I'm definitely falling on lust with your stories. Now, I'm on to the next chapter, just as soon as I pop some fresh batteries in Boris. I'm not gonna get much sleep tonight.

This is going to be a great series.

Thanks.

Bob