All Comments on 'Scarred'

Thank you.

*going to get a tissue...beautiful tender story

After reading the first two chapters of your new series "Fae War" I wanted to see what else you had written. I'm so glad I did. What a truly beautiful story it is. And as for it to be your first submission to Lit, you should feel proud.

I wish you continued success w/"Fae War" and everything else you write.

of these two please, it has potential to be a exploration of true love over the cosmetic, and meg's last line leaves things open to what she means

If only someone would come and 'suduce' me like that...

That was beautiful :)

Short but sweet. Let me re-phrase that to: short but hot and sexy!

Ms. Brown, you're a pleasure to read. I'm working my way through all of your writings so . . .

Wow, this is a very sensitive, loving story! Some might think it's a little sappy, but I'm sometimes kind of soft-hearted.

This is a loving story about redemption and second chances. Please write more about these two -- keep them together -- and give a good physical description of Kyle. Does he have chest hair? e seems to have a sizable cock for Meg's enjoyment. Looking forward to more!

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!