All Comments on 'Schoolgirls and Schoolboys'

back to the drawing board

may we have some more?

this was excellent, but too short.

of course, more dialogue and detail would be appreciated, like raisins in the oatmeal...

fuggin flawless. so. so good.

My only complaint is that it was a little short for my tastes. :/

personally, I love the brevity. it does really feel like someone relating a true story. there's enough there that I know exactly what went down, and the author feels no need to waste my time. think it's great.