All Comments on 'Scouting'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
On my honor I will do by best !

Really enjoyed your story! Being involved in scouting is a great thing. I could relate having fantasized about doing my best with a few den mothers myself !

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Scouting

good read thks

been there once

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
fantastic

Really enjoyed this story mixture of happiness and sadness

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 7 years ago

Kinda depressing that they only teased a bit more as a remnant of their shared intimacy, especially sad for Amy who now has to go without again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Help for Amy

The story was great, but it is sad that Amy ended up returning to a sexless existence. Perhaps a better ending would be for Nancy to tell Mike about a month after the training hike that they need to talk, and then start off with "You know Amy is my best friend" -- leaving Mike to dread what is coming next. Fortunately, Nancy goes on to say how sad it is that Amy's husband never wants to have sex with her, and maybe Nancy and Mike can help her out. Would Mike be willing to have a three-some with Nancy and Amy once a month or so? This would make Amy very happy, and it would add some spice to Mike and Nancy's sex life. Mike of course "reluctantly" agrees to do this. Four years later Mike and Nancy's marriage is stronger than ever, and Nancy and Amy's friendship is stronger than ever, and Mike is one of the luckiest men on earth.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
In response to Anonymous 04/19

Yes, that would have been fun, but then someone would have been complaining that the end wasn't very believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
In response to Anonymous 04/19 & 1/20

I agree and I think the author would have polished it up enough perhaps with Nancy aware and supportive, knowing something might happen and maybe even having broached the subject with her best friend prior to the trip.

Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

A great story but I think it needs to be a series where she seduces his wife and then talks her into a threescore, just an idea. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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