All Comments on 'Sea Sickness Ch. 08'

A very good story, Athena. Some intrigue, some suspense, some love, good sex, a tragedy and a heroine. Great ingredients.

That was great,, your grammer was perfect and I only found one slight flaw in the whole story. Please keep writting

So did Ryan impregnate his sister AND his mother?

How would they deal with THAT scenerio?!

Keep it going, Athena.

You followed the story line just perfectly. BUT please next time, don't mix present and future tenses so much. It slows down the reading and enjoyment.

It didnt start very smooth in the begining but did seem to get better as time went on. I noticed some of the words you used just didnt make sense. I noticed certain word you used were wrong. You should have had someone proof read you story. And by the way, yatchts dont have a self. They have swim platforms. I guess not taught you how to use a needle. Ryan would have never administered the meds without prior practice. I did enjoy the story

Next chapter? Please don’t leave Simone alone like that. 🙁

After 8 chapters and we still do not know Simone's fate. What happened to Allyson's yacht and money? What was the purpose of the red parrot and mineral oil?

More please, Is Alexis pregnant? do they get together with Simone? How many babies are there after a few years with them all together.