All Comments on 'Sean and Laura's Naughty Sunday'

by srjman

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frustrated2bfrustrated2bover 9 years ago
Well written and pure raw sex

I wanted to rush forward to keep pace with my own rising excitment, but wrapped in the mature dialogue as well. Perfection!

ordonexordonexover 9 years ago

Really enjoyed this story.. Looking forward to part 2 with this couple when they play out the threesome or cuckold fantasies

Jay RichardsJay Richardsabout 9 years ago
Nice

Srjman, I am hard and stroking to man, very nice.

Jay

Mantra23aMantra23aabout 9 years ago

Enjoyed the story immensely, the character development was well done and the sex well written.

Will there be more about her past experiences with other men or will they move on as a couple to include a third?

blksoldierblksoldierover 8 years ago
you need to write more stories

hey I liked your storyline the flow you certainly have a talent for writing I cant wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Funny and hot. I hope you write a seq(pre)uel.

Xringm1aXringm1aover 5 years ago
Well done!

Very well done. I was waiting on every word. I found myself wanting both of them. I have a feeling there is more to come from Sean and Laura and my groin is aching in anticipation!

PG564EPG564Eover 4 years ago
WOW!

Extremely well written, erotic, and made my cock feel like a piece of oak. Very sexy and possible in real life too. The word pictures you wrote describe my fantasy's of wife sharing also.

Hope to read more of your work!

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