All Comments on 'Seashells Ch. 01'

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Anonymousabout 12 years ago

Style

I wish I could write like this. Your descriptions made me feel as if I was sitting at the table with Jack and Georgia. Looking forward to the next episode

tazz317 about 12 years ago

THE SEA SHORE HOLDS MANY COLORS

and it takes a bunch to make a rainbow. TK U MLJ

Phxray54 about 12 years ago

Dear author,

Are we going to see and hear some roar in these 20's? Thank you for your wonderful imagination and descriptive style. We will be waiting with baited breath...

BigJohn601 about 12 years ago

Whew, a long night in a dark and dreary costal manse......

Next thing you know, Barnabas C....... Looking forward to more hot chocolate in the future. You do have a way with words..

JonTaylor about 12 years ago

Wonderful Start

You've a soft touch with words, placing them carefully and with feeling. Eagerly awaiting chapter 2.

ipmweb about 12 years ago

Great Start

Looking forward to more of the tale. Thank you

hodunk about 12 years ago

Great First Chapter

Wonderful start and I know the rest will be great.

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