by OldKingClancy
I've liked it so far. It's a good plot and you've done a good job with the characters. I can't wait for the next installment. Don't keep us waiting too long.
You had better make this story right and have them make a try at "both" of them being in love and work it out in your next Ch3 .!! I gave you another "5" as you write a good story == but why mess it up like this.????
I think anybody reading this will agree that we need a happy ending of some kind on this story.<<< Do your best.!
JAG
I'd love for these two to get together on happy, equally-in-love terms... but I can't see that happening with that last turn of events.
I did find your story very compelling. The plot is very good, but I had a little trouble keeping up with the characters and relationships. There was only a little sex, but what there was was very well written and erotic.
The problem with the story I found was that it was very authentic, and just too close to home to enjoy.