All Comments on 'Second Chances'

Very nice. And sweetly erotic.

A fantasy I'm sure many people have had.

Well done.

The ink in your pen is like a fine wine of a good vintage. Your stories improve each time you put together a new one. Congratulations.

Oh yes, it would be wonderful to have even one evening back in my 20-something body! A friend of mine had a bumpersticker once that read, "The Older I Get, The Better I Was!" Looking back, I shake my head at how much time I wasted worried about not being the perfect size, whatever elusive size that was. <br><br>

I definitely enjoyed your story. The only thing I would change is that you misspelled "waist" throughout, and used the word "waste" instead. Because it appeared more than once, it really caught my eye. Other than that, I loved the emotions expressed, and the hope at the end that the protagonist would learn from past choices so that she enjoys life to the fullest now.

Oh so sexy and romantic, yet another excellent story. I hope she learns her lesson and lives her life to the fullest. We all should do the same thing.

Liked your writing (also tripped over 'waste'). Great build-up and character development. Keep it up. Plus, don't be lonely - with writing like this you'll attract a steady following. I look forward to your next story. // R

Nicely written apart from waste when you meant waist

Very good story. Like the previous writer I noticed "waste" instead of "waist." That aside, I think you do a very good job. Convincing and erotic. I like your stories. Your character is very appealing. Lots of men, young and not so young, would like to have her, and it is good to read from the perspective of a still-passionate woman in her 40's who now knows what she wants and overcomes her shyness about her age and less than perfect body, inhibitions that hindered her in her physical youth. Mentally she is still young, and that is the main thing. Nice job. Keep them cumming!!

Adding to the ever present Typo Patrol , I can truly say that reading this was not a waist.

This was extremly well developed and written. I thought you were heading toward a clash of generations when some in her generation would have never experienced some sexual acts. Currently oral sex seems to universal, but with women who are over 60, many have never experienced cunnilingous or having a man reach orgasm in their mouth.

I hope for a sequel.

who cares about "typos" - perhaps she was thinking of T. S. Elliot and her deprived vagina metaphoricaly being a wasteland - until she rebelled and created circumstances where she could let things happen, naturally

many thanks

If you ever think of coming to Paris this lonely widower wpoiuld love to meet you

Part way through this story I wondered if Derick was getting a second chance as well. Perhaps a sequel at a later time?

seems like a good fantasy, but not as categorized. yes, the story was cute. yes, it was romantic, yes, it made me smile and reminisce, but who were the mature participants in the story if the medallion worked it's magic?

and, did she change her life and attitude when she changed back to her former body and work ethic?

If I knew then what I know now . . . .

And she got to live it.

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Such a beautiful story! I loved the characters and the passionate climax was so beautifully presented. You have a wonderful gift. Thank you for sharing it with us.

As a male, I enjoy reading about intercourse from the female perspective. Truly inspiring! Very good pacing and a tidy ending. Seems like it could go another story of what changes she makes going forward.Fun read!! THANK YOU!

I’m about Sandra’s age. This story made me think about some of the ones that got away. 5 stars.