All Comments on 'Second Chances Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Can't wait to read more

Great plot and character development so far.

hecate_portalhecate_portalalmost 20 years ago
More, please

I don't usually read the serial stories as few writers take the time to make them worthwhile. You did. Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Good story but...

could you have at least included more explicit sex with the victim?

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