All Comments on 'Second Chances Ch. 04'

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Nightowl22Nightowl22about 17 years ago
Very good love story

Of course, one wonders why she didn't yell out, "I'm barren" as he left but that's too easy for lovers.. Now, when she turns up pregnant, what will she do?? Confront him with the happy news?? What will he do?? Congratulate her, basically denying it's his?? This will require some means of determining it is his before the birth.. And now we have two people extremely unhappy and some straight talk would have prevented it all!! Still, we can see some happy days ahead unless they're both too stubborn. Very good, well-written read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I've read all your stories

You're so much fun to read! I had never read "Romance" novels until one day I stumbled upon one of yours. Being a man, I didn't think I could stomach the "rippled-muscles" and "firm, milky-white breasts" genre, but you have a different style, and I wish you much success as a professional writer.

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