All Comments on 'Second Lust'

This is quite different from any that I've read before. I look forward to more in this story. Thank you for an interesting read.

Very interseting, excellent plot development, would love to read more.

Great beginnings. The worst thing is the fear that there may not be a next chapter.

I found this story to be quite arousing. It has progressed very well...Not too fast, not too slow. I hope there will be more leading up to the time they meet.

Like "Being John Malkovich" in duplicate, within a parallel universe. Loved "Mr and Mrs Hand." Please, Sir, I want some more! Keep going!

It was interesting and hot, but definitely needs more and if I wasn't so tired I'd list off all the wonderful traits. Maybe you can just google "elements of a good story" but you won't really need to because it's clear you know and use them well.

I like SL a lot myself (although have little time for it), so I can definitely see everything mentioned here actually occurring in SL. The set-up and the thoughts around what was happening in SL is what really makes this an excellent story.

Just curious: Is there a continuation?

i absolutely LOVED this story, i do hope that you continue it!

I read your story some weeks ago and really enjoyed it. It was well written and plausible unlike many in this genre.

I hope there is more to come....I check each day to see the next part but so far have been dissapointed. Where is it???????????

love this - really subtle and sexy:-)

Love the story, it was like you were telling it instead of me reading it. Bravo!