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"Yes," she admitted. "It's . . . well, it's been a fantasy of mine, and I figured it was probably novel enough to engage your interest."
"Somehow I don't think your priest would approve . . ."
"Actually, he's the one who gave me the idea. Well, not directly. I was in counseling, and he suggested I get more creative about our . . . sex life. In order to keep you happy. Us happy," she amended. "Anyway, he proposed I take you someplace unorthodox and have sex, you know, somewhere out of our routine."
Since our routine lately was pretty much founded in the unorthodox, I could see how that might present a challenge. "So you want to sneak into a church . . ."
"Don't have to," she said, smugly. "I've still got my key from when I was on the outreach committee. So," she said, looking relieved that I was into the idea, "you want to bend me over a pew, fuck me rotten until I cum a half-dozen times, screaming my orgasm in the sanctuary, then stick your cock up my ass to finish? It's a little sacrilegious, but hey, we're still married in the eyes of God. He'll get over it."
How could a man say no to a proposition like that?
Besides, it was my birthday.
(Be sure to check out my website link from my author's page for exciting news about my new book!)
- COMMENTS
Anonymous6 months agoThis story is very well written and I really wanted to like it, but the protagonist was just too unlikeable in his request for revenge.
MattKester9 months agoWaded through all eight chapters. All I can say is that the style needs to be tighter, and there needs to be more story here. Even the sex got old after a while. And seriously: This isn't even interesting enough for me to pay for the book.
There are better and well-told stories across lit that basically tell the same story better. These eight chapters feel like a draft. Too many plot holes and "surprises." Even the diary entries don't really show what the main character seems to be deducing, though they come close.
If you want to tell a story, at least tell the full story and make it complete. And quit repeating yourself. We get that the wife was unfaithful, that she was really clueless (in blaming everyone else for the affair), and she really wants to maintain her status as a wife. Got that in the first two chapters. Now, tell the story. Are we reconciling or are we casting the woman adrift? The MC is moving toward reconciliation after punishment, but there needs to be more transformation within the characters.
Anonymousover 1 year agoNot my cup of tea. Calculating adulteress of a wife, calculating cruel abusive husband. Some find that fantasy sexy? Others might say brutish. One would think the couple would just seek a divorce, especially since he could apparently get other women, while she has family to help out. The author stretches it too much to be credible. No one heard back from the author because he probably went on to selling this stuff on Amazon. More power to him. Just not my preference. Too brutish a carnality. Even lusty intimacy for physical sake can be enjoyed absent such brutality. And the wife's rediscovery of her "love" suggests a mental adaptation such as Stockholm syndrome. Very, very brutish and sick.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI wish you would complete this story!! I can't find the link for your book. I need more please
Anonymousabout 2 years agoThis is so unbelievable yes it’s fiction yes it’s fantasy but it’s got to be a little believeable to be enjoyable or I’m missing the point. No pregnant woman could handle the torture an humiliation he’s causing her, depression is not to be sniffed at. 2 things would happen in this situation either she would kill herself as his treatment would cause her to be suicidal and she has no support network at all extremely lonely an life seeming pointless. Or my personal favourite she would after secretly informing a doctor of the abuse an seeking medication for depression and anxiety leaving out the details an also writing about the torture in her diary to be disclosed to police stab him repeatedly an with diminished responsibility for the mental cruelty maybe 6 mth in her mental health centre then free to live her life I wouldn’t kill just ensure his dick would no longer be functioning for all the “strange pussy” as he put it
discreetoneabout 3 years agoI am SO very disappointed that this story was never finished. I absolutely loved Bean Counter (and I'm incredibly sad that it seems to have disappeared from Literotica). It was so amazingly written from a literary standpoint wioth a lot of well written sexy scenes. I laughed so much reading it, and when I got to the penultimate chapter, found that it was the last one on Literotica and had an ending that basically said 'if you enjoyed and want to see how it ends, go buy my e-book cheap on lulu.", you can bet your butt I did. And it was such a well written ending too, very satisfying, and led up well to the sequel, this series "Second Wife". I was really excited to see where the story might go and what would happen with the sister. If this story was finished and put up on his website, I would definitely head off to go buy it. I'm very tempted to go and get the Cock of Ages e-book, because I thoroughly enjoyed that story as well, and it feels unfinished here (so maybe he finished it in his publishing?). Think I may have even found out who the author is in the outside publishing/author world, and tempted to head out and read those stories as well. Here's hoping that after all this time, Creamer05 will come back and finish these stories and delight us all the more with his wonderful imagination!
discreetoneabout 3 years agoI'm SO disappointed that this wasn't finished. I very thoroughly enjoyed
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