All Comments on 'Secret Hiding Place'

by xyster

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
So extremely good this story is.

So extremely good this story is.

I wish I had it in a paperback edition, reading it on a bus, an

aeroplane, or on a train station while waiting for somebody to arrive. I wish

I could find it hardcover in a library.

Convinced Greetings from someplace a couple of decades too early I

guess!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Assimilation of lustful curiosity.

A clever way of getting the reader to follow the storyline with a touch of sexual excitement. The writer has no hurry to finish off the story,like some others, but is able to sustain the flow to the mystery of "who is reading the book as well". I suspect it could be a twist that it was her mother instead, but not. Very good story and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great reading

Subtle, smooth, leading but sublime. Absolutely delicious. I now expect no less from you Xyster.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great story

it was great to read the way the story was narrated. i woul hav eloved to be having the same intentions

apollonaapollonaover 14 years ago
Amazing

Why have you stopped writing? It's been several years since I've seen anything new from you...

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Please come back!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

enjoyed

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Sister leans back

That was an excellent way to cross the taboo.

I have now read more of your stories. You have a very enjoyable style.

I will read all of your work. I had a good laugh over the jokes in "Horsing around".

I'm am chuckling just thinking about reading more.

Love your writing, looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I enjoyed very much...the building and expectations

OleguyOleguyalmost 11 years ago
You do it so well.

I know I am late as I only just found you.

Heartiest congratulations.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Awesome Fucker!

U are an awesome fucker dude! I have been waiting to be fucked like this!!!! Sweet ecstasy! Nice keep going! The pose u like is my fav too. I am a girl. Angelique

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Simply amazing

I love this story and the way it's written made me feel if I was there watching

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

First Off-you are a lady, not a "dude" as so many of the readers have referred to you. And, I so much appreciate that you are able to write so dramatically and emotionally. You bring your readers right into the story with you!!

I am on the the 3rd story of yours; after looking at your "Biography", seeing you are female..."Oh, Momma!!"

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