All Comments on 'Secrets of Fears'

I loved the way you kept postponing the inevitable. I wish a friend would use my beautiful blonde wife that way.

Sounded like she was having a lesson of taekwondo or karate with all the ooohhh!!! aeeeiiii!! Chop! Chop!Oh wait! Perhaps having a serious case of constipation!

Grammar problems a plenty. Yet another masterpiece...NOT! Fit for the dumpsite.

it was written from the heart, but try leaving out the sound effects next time - it's often best to allow your reader to imagine...

And don't be discouraged by the "English professor". Ain't if funny how he has plenty of grammatical errors in just 3 lines? The plonker probably couldn't write a story to save his life.

The sounds and gramar didn't stopped me from loving the whole story. Very erotic! I liked the whole plot very mutch.

Thanks for this very good story

Really liked the gradual flow of events - didn't mind all the Oooohs and Aaaaahs, thought it reinforced the notion of Lola as a very expressive girl in need of a voice for her pent up sexual energy. Dare I say 3 pages was aplenty? Looking forward to more.

very hot & descripive, i could really picture it happening to me. grammar got very poor at times tho, which was distracting.

Some grammatical issues, like previously mentioned, were a little distracting. But overall a very hot story, although not really in the non-consent genre to me.

Hot until the last sentence which did not make any sense because it was garbled.

This is why a coward fucks a mans woman. You are a 💩turd not a human bring fucking weak low self esteem women is what rapist do. C oward

Pinta you have not written in years, and it s a shame for the plot was excellents and/but your comments where poor !

In your introduction you clarified that a friend translated it : thanks to him... For the purist go read in pinta mother tongue !

Another remark was on rape ! WTF this guy is doing in a "non consent/reluctance" section ! Estupido and bad mouthed ....

For once the plot is very good and don't need basic blackmail or guns ! On the border of "Mind Control", she is reluctant but end f...

So I hope that those bad comments didn't stop you start as a writer. I didn't found another Pinta writing anywhere I'll check again but please keep it on !