All Comments on 'Secrets of the Tea Room Ch. 05'

Two chapters in the same day, such a pleasant surprise. I continue to enjoy your marvelous narrative and the believable dialogue. Based on the conversation at the end of this chapter, it looks like things are going to get a little hotter in the next chapter.

Every character you have created here has an air of mystery about them. You have managed to let us see just a few glimpses into the events that shaped their lives and brought them to this point.

Very good so far.

a decade or so, I have rarely come across a story so well portrayed. I anxiously await.

Thanks, Dave