All Comments on 'Secrets Revealed Pt. I Ch. 01'

This was a good start. Well written too.

The next chapter.

Nice buildup. Nice character development. Looking forward to Chapter 2.

Of the thousands of stories on Literotica, there are very few that merit special recognition. This is one. Most have flaws in plot, spelling, grammar, or combinations of these. However, this story stands head and shoulders above most other stories posted here. Highly recommended.

I must have noticed it the first time through, and I've read this several times, but when I read the UT (no, Knoxville), I said to myself, Summer Camp, and then a couple lines later, "Scipio", I just laughed out loud.

Love your writing. Love Scipio's too. Thanks for sharing your talents.